Ohio Impromptu

Terribly sorry, sir! I missed briefing due to suspected KGB involvement in the camp.

Lebensraum for all! I shall commando-crawl in from the East after taking Vladivistok. Look for me in the foothills of the Ural Mountains on the 1st of November - I ...

I am staying as FAR AWAY FROM MATH as humanly possible. If you couldn't tell, math and I dont really get along very well. Infact, I hate it wiht the ...

I'm proud of myself. With this chapter I broke 10,000 words. :D All comments/suggestions/feedback are greatly appreciated. Enjoy. Chapter 5 Seventy-eight times had Helena’s view of the wall across f

This is a nice opening you have here. I like the description, but moreso I like the fact that you weren't just describing events, you described with nice detail what ...

You know, I haven't really thought about it until now. I chose the 'express myself' option, but I had to think a bit first. If a lack of writing caused ...

I wasted most of a human biology lesson yesterday doing this, and I thought it was pretty fun, so I thought at least one other person in this universe might. ...

Courier New. Size 11. I won't write without that.

That helpful link is the Snowflake Process. If I were the sort of person to stick to a plan, I'd use it. It's incredibly helpful, so I use bits and ...

I found out at lunchtime today at school. Needless to say I ran around frantic spreading the word. We got the flag raised at half mast and laid a wreath ...

Much better. :wink:

I'm about to give you the fullest critique I've done since... ever. Be thankful. Anyway, as a whole you have a pretty sound piece here, but its a bit hollow. ...

I like it. It has a good message about the universalness of bacon and how it is in demand everywhere... because it is so good. Just one thing: Michael Eisner ...

I'm in the process of extending this at the moment and the flashback will be posted tommorow night some time. Right now I just want to see if anyone else ...

I don't know if you've heard the new AFI album, but for some reason this reminded me a lot of a few of the songs. The lights, the rain, the ...